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  1. soumyav says:
    June 19, 2012 at 8:05 pm

    what a co incidence ..we both wrote on same topics yet different aspects… 🙂

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  2. soumyav says:
    June 19, 2012 at 8:08 pm

    one word coul dhave change dthe menaing and outlook of ur poem.the last line..
    stumbled,
    fell,
    stood up,
    love lost,
    eternal love gained…

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    1. Neeraj Kumar says:
      June 20, 2012 at 1:55 am

      Really, it would have! 🙂

  3. Hemant Sharma says:
    July 15, 2012 at 5:15 pm

    Love it.

    Reply
    1. Neeraj Kumar says:
      July 15, 2012 at 5:20 pm

      Thank you Hemant!

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