Surprisingly we met,
Suddenly I fell,
Haphazardly we indulged,
Endlessly we talked,
Deeply I felt,
Open heartedly you responded,
Unconventionally I approached,
Calmly you reacted,
Inadvertently I explained,
Thoroughly you understood,
Amazingly we continued,
Candidly you appraised,
Passionately I touched,
Patiently you handled,
Exceptionally I loved,
Heavenly it seemed,
Magically it proceeded,
Knowingly we separated,
Willingly you ignored,
Angrily I denied,
Devotedly I plead,
Sadly it changed,
Forcefully you lied,
Occasionally we fought,
Hypothetically it ended,
Madly I cried,
Unfortunately you didn’t bother,
Rationally I recovered,
Finally I learned,
Ultimately we lost.
Exposed Emotions 
Wow! Love the candid expressions and the way the poem is structured. But I wish the end wasn’t so heartbreaking! Hats off for this splendid poem Neeraj!
So glad to see your feedback, Thank you!!! *Smiles*
Very nice, very sad, but seems to be, the way love goes.
Technically impressive and emotionally honest- a notable artistic achievement. Congratulations!
Thanks Meka!
Brilliant stuff !
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Thank you very much! 🙂
The images that appear with your words always provide a captivating blending that produces a lovely gem….you have blossomed in your writings in a very awesome way. Bless you always my brother!
Thank you so much, Wendell. You always say the nicest words.
Very beautifully written, but such a sad ending 😦
Reality sometimes bites 😦
Well, ouchies.
This is one of your best, I think I will keep coming back to this from time to time. This gives me a good feel 🙂
-Naima
I would love to see you keep coming 🙂