Are you alive?


Your heart doesn’t beat on someone’s sight,


You always find wrong in other’s right,


You don’t have the trust,


Don’t feel the need of love or the lust,


You don’t have a dream to dream with open eyes,


There is no hurdle in your way to fight,


Glittering stars do not excite,


Rainbow is mere a pattern of light,


Chirping of birds is just a noise,

And nothing echoes inside you,

No sound,

No voice,

You better check your nerves,

You might not be alive!

10 Comments Add yours

  1. skuysons says:

    Yeah! That’s something I’m trying to figure out myself. Have a great day!

    1. Pieces says:

      Oh! Thank you for reading. Have a nice day!

  2. globalunison says:

    Moving is the sign of life! A good one!

    1. Pieces says:

      Sure it is. Thank you!

    2. globalunison says:

      You’re welcome.

  3. Joan Miranda says:

    glad to know I am still alive…:)Hahaha…:)
    Nice poem! NO NOT NICE. AMAZING.

    1. Pieces says:

      Hahaha, Yeah I’m sure you are 🙂 Thank you!!

  4. inspirgirl says:

    Reblogged this on Life 2 live on wheels and commented:
    It is true; sometimes, just because we breathe doesn’t mean we are alive. I’m still finding my passion, so that I can truly live life to the fullest.

    1. Pieces says:

      Thank you for the reblog!

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