Bunch of everything

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Photo Credit: wallpaperstock.net
Few dreams on your eyelids,
Sense of being around always,
Few happy memories,
Few words unsaid,
I’ll leave,
When I’ll go away from you,
I’ll leave my dreams, my breaths with you,
Few unfinished paintings,
Bunch of incomplete poems,
Few unkissed kisses,
Couple of secret grudges I’ll leave,
When I’ll go away from you,
I’ll leave my world, my heartbeats with you.

16 Comments Add yours

  1. words4jp says:

    what can i say – my tears say it all. this is beautiful Neeraj.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Aww.. I’m so glad you liked it. I was little nervous while posting it though.. Thank you!

    2. words4jp says:

      why nervous?

    3. Neeraj says:

      I think one should not leave anything ‘unfinished’ behind .. that’s why.

    4. words4jp says:

      i agree – but, i have discovered that closure is a rarity.

    5. Neeraj says:

      Yeah.. and uncertainty of life will never let loving hearts finish their business 😦

  2. Adele Holifield says:

    Love this!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Adele.. Its good to see you enjoy my poems 🙂

  3. edgarone2 says:

    Why go away? Wouldn’t it be more sadness if you leave behind unfinished things?

    1. Neeraj says:

      Sometimes staying or finishing things aren’t in our hands.. and things which aren’t supposed to end, remain incomplete.

  4. ladywhispers says:

    Wow. The most perfect poetry I have ever read. This bowled me away with what all I could read in it.
    I know its unfinished and yet finished I found…because maybe completeness always leaves us empty so better this way 🙂

    1. Neeraj says:

      This is one of the best compliments I ever got.. Thank you! Take it this way.. things can only be finished when someone is done with the other person.. as we never know about the end, how can we finish then? Thanks once again for reading and appreciating 🙂

  5. silversun008 says:

    Love this. The picture ties in very well also 🙂

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you!

  6. owingapoem says:

    I absolutely love this. Beautiful. Just beautiful.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you !

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