Sweet Surprise

Many times
I told you
that I didn’t like it
when you talked
in those moments
‘cause I loved the sound
when our skins slithered
on each other
and that’s why when
last night
You opened your mouth
when my hands were
on your thighs
and lips around your belly button
I had no choice but....
to stop you from talking
and it was a(h)mazingly better
than before
I think I’ll let you open
your mouth
from now onwards
Photo Credit: whattoseeinvenice.com
Photo Credit: whattoseeinvenice.com

19 Comments Add yours

  1. Oloriel says:

    Very lovely and sweet, I liked the story and the message.

    1. Neeraj says:

      being infected by Chatty Owl’s writing 🙂

    2. Oloriel says:

      yes, it is defenatly an epidemy 😀

    3. Neeraj says:

      I know 😀

  2. Chatty Owl says:

    Hey!!!!! What a hell?! Im smiling like an idiot. I’ll be honest with both of you. I started reading and the thoughts in my head were twirling, thinking “huh? Did he reblogged my post or something?” When did i write this?!
    Wow. You truly made this chatty owl-ish!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Hahahaha.. Thank you, thank you! *Takes bow* 😀

    2. Chatty Owl says:

      “Sweet surprise” that nearly turned into a “heart attack”!

    3. Neeraj says:

      Lol, not so easily 😛

    4. Chatty Owl says:

      Seriously, you got me shaking!

    5. Neeraj says:

      I swear it was just intended to be a *sweet surprise* 😀 😛 but I’ll consider it as a compliment. 🙂

    6. Chatty Owl says:

      And a surprise it was! I need to change my style to not be so predictable with my writing!

    7. Neeraj says:

      Ah, no!! Before that i’ll stop imitating you.. 😦 I LOVE your very style!!

    8. Chatty Owl says:

      😉 you know im flattered, right?

    9. Neeraj says:

      Really? You got me chuckling now 😉

  3. Shards Of DuBois says:

    oh so bad!! you I mean!!! lol

    1. Neeraj says:

      Hahahaha.. I know I’m 😉 Thanks a lot! 😀

  4. words4jp says:

    beautiful. when you write these particular pieces, steam comes out of my desktop!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Lol.. That seems good 😀

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