On your tongue

Right under my feet is shaking.
My mind loves to babble too much;
Stumped it’s now,
Its time it’s taking.
I know my face, what does it say.
I’m trying but I’m not good at faking.
So eventually
You would know
that my dreams are in the making,
and then you would try
but cannot stop me
from tasting my mouth
on your tongue

I’ve just got to realize
that I need to, for another minute,
scan you by my eyes
‘til my lascivious molecules would keep breaking,
and in the middle of this chemical reaction,
may my expressions would tell
that you’re fucking my mind.
It’s my mental virginity,
You’re taking.
So you may try
but cannot stop me
from tasting my mouth
on your tongue

Photo Credit: 8tracks.com
Photo Credit: 8tracks.com

12 Comments Add yours

  1. bejamin4 says:

    Very cool: ” lascivious molecules “. A great post.

  2. Noora says:

    Wow! 5 stars 🙂

  3. The image works so well with this! It really illustrates the mood of your poem.

    1. NEKNEERAJ says:

      Thank you, Ring Lady!

  4. When I feel the words I am privileged to read, I know I have found a site I will love. I have read only two posts thus far but captivated I am by your craftsmanship in writing. Kindly, Belinda.

    1. NEKNEERAJ says:

      Thank you Belinda. I really appreciate your kind words.

    2. You’re most welcome. I hope that you are having an amazing day!

  5. Hello, Exposedemotions. Would you be interested in writing a page of poetry for Girl Poems? I appreciate your flirtatious writing style and I’d love to have your contribution. If you’re interested you can email me at GirlPoems@yahoo.com Let me know, thanks!

    1. NEKNEERAJ says:

      Thank you for your kind words. You can use any of my poetry and publish on your blog leaving a pingback.

    2. You’re welcome. I was actually asking for a contribution not for my blog but for my chap-book.

    3. NEKNEERAJ says:

      Okay. Let me know the theme. I’ll try to give it a shot.

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